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Omg update nowz
Daddy it's good but needs more details and it's like all rushed and smushed together, spread it out more instead of all at once
Bumpdate
UPDATE I was awoken by someone shaking my shoulders. "Hey, Jessy, wake up. Jessy, please wake up. We need to go. Come on." I opened my eyes...
That's better when I can I will
Stop yelling at me I'm in pain and have to sleep a lot I'm trying I really am
Julie ^.^ I'll collab with ya
Jessy rubbed her wrists where the chains had held her. "Come on let's find away out of here." The minute Rose and Jessy turned towards the door to...
Thanks
I agree with magical, work on it some more, look at other role plays for help on how to build on then wait till there are less of them or move it...
That's a little better not much but ya
Needs more description for it to be an rp, it's kinda confusing
*day=say
Ok so I came up with this, I think it might just be a one-shot, since I have my other story and am trying to work out a collab. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...
Bumpy
Not so fast noes time for ROUND TWO u have been pmd
That was nice I have recieved very nice shorts from you guys
*fan
U still have to pm me a short example of you writing that's not part of any work you may have posted in Dan fiction