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I will be happy to critic as well! And receive! Please don't just post "Have nothing to critic" because that is probably a lie I don't care how...
I will be starting this up again! Please wait a while thank you
-walks behind Jax- "..."
Ah! I'm sorry!
*leaves thread*
Waaaahhhh!! I'm gonna miss you sooo much Alex! I understand why you're leaving, believe me I respect you for it But I'm gonna miss you...
"S-sorry..." -releases him-
Lmao excuse the ";;;;" I kinda went berserk... ~~~~~~~<><><>~~~~~~~<><><>~~~~~~~ A while later there was a knock on my door. "What?" Adam...
NO I DIDN'T FINISH!!!
"I can do that..." -looks away quickly- "If I ever become a burden, just leave me... I promise you I will try hard not to be one though..."
Even once we got home there was nothing but silence between us... Of course Maria prances into the room like she always did and cooed over our...
Update Adam!!
-arches eyebrow- "Yes...?"
"Jax... I won't get hurt... I can protect myself at times..." -sighs- "I'm used to doing that.. But I can't leave you alone.. You're hurt. So...
"..." -grabs him and forcefully shoves him to the ground being careful not hurt him- "Don't give me that bullshit! It's not all about you, I'm...
"...A-Alright..."
You wrote a story Danny?! Anyways, I personally liked it It was confusing at first, but I liked it!
"Jax!" -follows him- "Please, I'll go with you.. If I'm a burden I'll leave, but at least let me go with you for a while..."
"Why...?" -grabs his arm- "Jesus... You shouldn't push yourself at the moment... Just rest a bit..."