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Idol Fiction Let's get something straight: Idol Fiction is not a story or rp. It was inspred by Hexin's FF News. And American Idol (Which I don't...
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Lol, Aaron Knight.... Since I introduced Aaron to PIMD it feels like everyone is copying him, you wouldn't believe how many Aarons I've seen, this...
Interesting interesting..... Needs some more details and to slow down a bit with story line/progress. But otherwise it's very good
I agree with Z person (forgot name like 2 secs after opening posting thingy). You need LOTS more details. That whole "fight scene" went down...
Interest.... It needs more details and for some reason at the beggining it felt as if you repeated words too much and progressed too quickly.......
I admit, I got lost every once in a while.... But that happens with nearly every FF story I read. Yours however.... It's.... It's..... It is a...
We had an argument about mods being too tacky and overused/too overused by us/similar to things overused by us. Choose one number from each line...
I barely get anything other than bumps too, infact, I mainly barely get those too. You don't see me making these threads. Maybe to tell everyone...
Chapter 7 So, you thought chapter 4's title was meaningless eh? Adam's POV "So, you lost?" The voice came from the chair infront of which...
It'll be ended soon.
Chapter 6 Aaron James' POV I really wish Percyous hadn't agreed to sit with these fools. He knew as well as I did that we needed to have a...
Chapter 5 New Friends Percyous' POV I followed James to the small window inorder to get my food. As I stepped up to the window a wooden...
I want to make a profile just to piss some people off even though there Is no skele and this is a bit poorly made..... But it's too much...
(Age change accepted)
One problem with your logic. There's nothing for me to be guilty about when you could take care of this yourself by pushing a fricken button.
So I DID read it wrong, either way, agreed
????? What are you talking about?
Not everyone has the time, strength or patience to handle other people's stuff AND their own. Learn to deal with your own crap. I can understand...
Accepted.