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Noelle: Thank you. *follows the instructions the guard gave her, and knocks lightly on the door*
Noelle: *walks in, the studio* Security: I'm sorry but this studio is reservation only. Noelle: I'm just here to see Chase, Chase Robins....
(Never said he was accepted. Try not to copy my characters please. :| Anyway, yeah he's in.)
Noelle: *thanks to the speed of her car, she pulls into a parking spot right in front of the studio, and steps out, shutting the door behind her*
(You really copied my my characters skeleton a lot on your characters. :|.
Noelle: *drives to the recording studio* ^.^
Noelle: *gets into her Coupe, turning the engine on*
Noelle: Twitter @NoelleLeigh: @Chase_Robins Hey, I'll be meeting you after all. :)
Noelle: No, it was stupid for me to come here anyway, you almost ruined my life. The whole world or at least the whole world has saw me naked, and...
(Just hold up :)) Noelle: WHAT!?
Noelle: *shakes her head, and turns around, trudging off* What a waste of time.
(Arcadia University is the high school)
Noelle: *crosses her arms* What could you possibly want from my life? People are gonna get suspicious if they see us together. >:|
(Oh yeah that's fine)
Time skip Noelle: *spots Jack on the corner, and marches to him frowning*
Noelle: *bites her lip, and walks downstairs leaving the townie*
(Everybody can't be SUPER smart okay? -_- Only one person can be top of the school.)
An hour later, Noelle is ready... [img] [img]
(She is also top of her grade. I could say school, her GPA is through the roof for a Junior)
(She replied on the last page 1 comment before yours.)