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"Yes, you did, with a dart."
"Ugh... We're not there yet." He said, getting up and picking up the tube, "I'll be sucking has out of cars if you need me."
Three pages with the X bit and it would've been perfect.
He chuckles, "I could tell. Wait, Corry, arent you supposed to be filling up the car?"
"Well you're doing a great job!" He said with a little laugh.
He ears some of the chili, "Naw, it is pretty good, though!"
"Oh damn."
"Dinner's ready!" He said, putting chili into two bowls.
"Right." He said putting her down.
(The reason I bring up problems is so the problems actually have an effect, not so they can be solved five minutes later.)
"Only looks like you've got two coats there..." He said, "I'm good, and Jem seems fine, the girls can share them or something."
"But first, chili!@
He smiles and kisses back, "Thanks." He says with a chuckle.
"Now we must ride into the sunset on my ten speed bike!" He said in a hero, yet joking tone.
"Oh god, all I can taste is gas..."
"I'll save you!" He called out jokingly, running over to her.
"Ugh... Fine."
"No, no, I can do this, I swear!"
"I'd save you any day, any time, anywhere." He said with a smile.
"You know guys, this gasoline is actually pretty frikken delicious!" He says sarcastically.