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-I look down at Tony and takon- what's he doing
"Whats he saying?"
"Not Takon..." -looks down sadly-
"Dang, you need any help?"
"I should probably be more careful then..."
"How can he die if we're already dead?"
"What the hell just happened?"
(lol, and it's Charlie)
-I regain myself and see the air bubble, I help push it up with the water-
-I pass out at the ponds bottom-
-swims down trying to rescue, each time getting shocked-
-I fall back, stunned by the electricity-
-I see somebody struggling in the water and grab their shirt collar-
-I fall off, straight into the pond below me-
-I soar through the sky, not noticing that I'm slipping-
-I climb onto the dragons back, as if in a trance-
-I walk towards one of the dragons reaching out the pet it's nose-
-I resurface only to realize everybody else is gone-
(I think the others dropped out)
(do we fall yet?)