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Oh my god. We're not slamming you. It's called criticism. I get criticized everyday: from my stories to what I wear in real life. But I TAKE that...
Following on what ApplePie said, oh my lord. I'm sorry, but I could barely read this. 1. It's really really really short. You NEED to make your...
I know. You keep saying that, but it hasn't come. If you were trying to publish, I guarantee they'd send your story back. There's little...
Okay, I just need to say this. I'm not slamming you, I'm trying to help make your writing better. You NEED to fix your grammatical errors. Oh my...
This is my worst pet peeve: When someone writes a story and there's almost NO paragraphs in each update. Also, as someone before said, PLEASE...
Woo 4 readers
The soft and cushioned white walls stood ever so close to me. Close enough to touch with a movement of my long, pale arms, yet far enough to keep...
You guys need to bump for updates
ʗɧɑǷƮɛƦ 4 - A͜ƦƦɪѵɪℕց A͜Ʈ Ʈɧɛ ʗɑǷɪƮօƖ I woke up late in the morning feeling very rested. Best soak up all of this lovely feeling while it's...
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Bump?
I have 11 readers Plus those stupid lurkers
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ʗɧɑǷƮɛƦ 3 - Ʈɧɛ ƮƦɑɪℕ Ʀɪɖɛ Ʈօ Ʈɧɛ ʗɑǷɪƮօƖ W e rode to the train station in a chic black car. It was beautiful inside with black and ivory...
Dude, I made this game
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Pickles.
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