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ʗɧɑǷƮɛƦ 7 - Ʈɧɛ ƮƦɪßʊƮɛ ǷɑƦɑɗɛ T he next thing I knew I was standing in a horse driven chariot at the back of the line of 11 other horse driven...
Why thank you
No bumps?
Finish, please
ʗɧɑǷƮɛƦ 6 - Ʈɧɛ ՏƮყƖɪʂƮʂ I was woken up by the shrill sounds of Effie saying "It's a big, big, big day!". I rubbed my eyes and felt immediately...
Well, this certainly is...different.
ʗɧɑǷƮɛƦ 5 - Ʈɧɛ ʗɑǷɪƮօƖ We arrived at the place we were staying in a short space of time. We piled out the car to be greeted by another huge mob...
Okay, I'm asking to have this locked. This argument is pointless if NayNay can't get the picture.
Bump
We all gave you criticism at almost the same time and you went off on us. Sorry?
Teehee.
Apple, this is basic criticism. I know you're trying to defend her, but if she can't take this type of criticism, there are much worse people in...
She's not getting the point if she's saying to stop reading if we don't like the way she writes.
Criticism* That* Off* Okay, when at least half of your readers are posting advice and criticism, you need help with your story. And yes, you are...
NayNay, we get that you've been told you are a good writer. We don't need to hear you say it 50 times. You have what we call POTENTIAL. This piece...