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Jess: -Finishes her flapjack and waits for Ryan to finish-
Jess: -Runs in a different direction, seeing a wild deer-
Jess: -Smiles- That'd be good
Jess: -Rolls her eyes-Fine, whoever catches the most wins
Jess's P.O.V Jess sat in a small tattered seat as she gazed at her Cheerios, floating in a milky sea.She sighed as she drew her gaze away and...
Jess: I have a few more minutes...-Smiles-
Jess: -Glares at him and throws a acorn off a tree at him- C'mon, let's go hunt ,Dani -Empathises Dani-
CJS for best forumer, too.
Woah, this is pretty good.Original and well written. Update!
Jess: Mind if I head back after this -Yawns again-
Jess: -Stands up and rolls her eyes- This is your good mood? -smirks-
Jess: -Closes up the bank-
Jess: -Yawns- Do you know what time it is?
And biggest noob. (Biggest nerd too)
Jess: Meh -yawns- Can you budge now, before I'm squashed to death -Laughs-
Jess: -Takes a bite of flapjack- Tastes good -Laughs-
(ohh,oops.) Jess: -Looks up at Ryan and rolls her eyes- Someone needs to go on a diet..
Jess: -Smirks, staggering up- You two are going down -Laughs and pounces-
Jess: -Laughs and smiles-
Jess: Unfair!2 against 1! -Laughs-