Separate names with a comma.
For the record, Rebecca Black is a better singer now. And hmmm. I'd say Miley
Update tonight or tomorrow
All these got 9.9?
It's a little bit typical with the whole new girl thing, but wow! You're pretty great at writing! Your descriptions are spot on
For dialogue, please add a coma before the last quotation and make dialogue a new paragraph. You also need to divide your writing into paragraphs...
Interesting . Beautiful writing .
THAT IS BEYOND AWESOME
NOOOOOOO
Extra Info : • Terissa is confused about her feelings, as you can probably tell. She acts rudely and sweetly to Preston numbers of times...
Cake!
OMG . It's so emotional and detailed. I really love this, Tash
thank you, Sammi bby
Bump
HUNGER GAMES OKAY SAMMI.
I have so many errors . I'm too lazy to proofread okay.
Hm . I'll choose easier names for my next story .
WAIT WHAT.
OMG ALEX PETTYFER ?. And my story is so sad . Bump!
Cute, Shana! I was thinking Toliver and Prerissa
OH YEAH. Couple names...