Separate names with a comma.
Maxi: *appears in front of Kaitlyn and smiles* Hi and bye.
Maxi: *coughs
Maxi: *hums while walking out*
Maxi: *goes out for fresh air*
Maxi: *opens mouth*
(I think you can still join. ) Maxi: *puts ear on the wall and listens*
Maxi: *appears in someone's dorm*
Maxi: *keeps appearing out of nowhere* Hehe..
Maxi: *grabs Alecia and appears back at her dorm*
Maxi: Who am I kidding? *appears at home and sees Alecia*
Maxi: *forgets about Alecia* Alecia! *appears back on the steps of the school and runs*
Maxi: *appears back at dorm 103, falling* Bad luck..
Maxi: Then don't.
Capitalize your I's please..
Maxi: I'm not!
Maxi: *her stomach growls and turns red* Sorry you had to hear that...
Maxi: *opens eyes and looks at Shiloh* Thank you.
Maxi: *closes eyes and jumps off*
Maxi: *looks down and shakes head* No.. I think I might fall off.
Maxi: *climbs a tree, almost falling* Woah!