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Ash- -sits down, waiting for something- When is something going to die? ^^ There is usually a show. But alas, I am merely invisible, I guess no...
Ash- I don't know why everyone is in panic. I think it's beautiful. -hands clasped together, swooning- Back home it was much more breath-taking....
Ash- -eyes go red, and half of her face is black- Oh dear. Can't transform now. ^^ -goes back to originality-
Ash- Oh. But my chainsaw. -sets it aside- I'll come back for you. *gives a kiss*
Ash- ^^. Oh how lovely. A fire. Who created it? -goes to the fire, and goes inside, enjoying the warmth on the fire of her skin-
Ash- -pouts- Aww, darn! I wish I had my friends over! No one isn't that fun as I thought they were. Oh well ^^
Ash- -bounces dress, and giggles- Wow. So much people! ^^ -holds chainsaw, full of cracked old blood- Haven't used you in forever! ^^
_______________________ Ash Downry Age-17 Stuffing my closet- Oh, you would usually find my chainsaw, which I always use to help my friends out,...
(May I join? ^^)
If you need any tips..Pm me! Always around for ideas, etc.
That's fine. Great you have a sudden interest in it, welcome to the family! You'll have lots a fun when you meet many of the people here, etc.
Overall, a good start.
Bump Try spacing a little, and put more details!
I really enjoy the coffee, but they forgot to spell my name as well. It's usually.... 1. "Skeylr" 2. "Kii" 3."Skwayer" Or something like that....
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Nice thread. Gives a different view of view. Enjoyed it.
Cyn- -goes to the camp, tired, sitting down on a stump- Vittorio- -stretches and writes a few notes down-
You should.
I have no pity. She's giving you criticism, so think about it.
Wellireallywouldntperfercoldgrapes,ilikecoldslushiegrapeflavored.