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I have a boyfriend. Who is uh, I don't know. A person. I also don't date emotionally unstable people Phil that includes you. I'll still send...
I'm not nice
Wait, so you're gender fluid? Or transgender?
Now, I'm going to go finish restoring the Hipster Kingdom aka my bedroom. Don't give yourself an aneurysm taking a shit.
OH I WANNA GIVE SPIT FEEDBACK You're pretty when you're naked. That is all.
Had me up till the more words to change into a poem bit. Can you please elaborate?
I was being sarcastic. I don't cry . Also, I've been taught writing shouldn't be a form of therapy.
Thanks, pickles . I like to cry into my pillow and write sad stuff in my spare time.
I had to write one that rhymes and want to submit it to the journal at the end of May. I don't normally try to rhyme so yea. Finder's keepers,...
Aye. I lied. There's two I need feedback on. Here's the first. ---- the box part I (a list of things i would not normally talk about) under my...
I'll try.
Syaoran, Bro. Wanna help me by critiquing a poem I have to submit to my teacher this week?
Shh shh, baby, come join us. We need more attention. Become one of us.
I COMPLIMENTED HIS CONNECTIONS. IM TRYING HERE DAMN. WE KNOW IM NOT NICE
I don't think I should have to back up every single thing I say . However, when you post in the future I'll keep in mind you like to have...
Firstly, I have a vagina (I took the time to check). Second of all, I am not close-minded. I stated my opinion on what he posted. I, personally,...
I get that you're suffering the loss of someone I'm also just being an ass because I can. I actually think your connections in your work are...
That doesn't take intelligence, that takes the ability to pity a stranger.
Free verse should still have some sort of flow. This is lacking. It's good in someways, but it's lacking any sort of proper structure
That's still not poetry.