Separate names with a comma.
(: Good job darlin!
Katie: *Plays with his hair, biting her lip*
Katie: *Turns bright red, staring at the ground* S-Sorry...
I like it, but try this: "I guess it will improve her learning." said Mum.
Katie: *Giggles, brushing it away from his face, staring into his eyes*
>:L Must change title-
:0 ORly?
Katie: *Grins* It's fluffy and adorable. *Messes with his hair, giggling*
Candy's tasting sweeter on the moon. I ran faster. "Jillian! No!" I stopped listening to other sounds. "Jillian! Please don't leave mommy,...
Katie: *Hesitates, grabbing his arm* Wait!
I'm only 11, I only know so many.
Katie: I dunno. *Shrugs, picking up her viles and sticking them in her back pocket*
Katie: I'm Katie, nice to meet you... *Smiles a bit, laughing quietly*
I saw I failed it when I see it says [i] in the front of my words. Let this die, I have to fix it.
Katie: Hehe, yeah, that was me.. *Pulls her hair back with a band, tying it*
No duh. Sorry about the italics, it's SIX THIRTY IN THE MORNING, SO DON'T GET ME CRANKIER THAN I ALREADY AM. I know what I'm doing, I just...
Can I say, use apostrophes? Question marks aren't substitutes, and neither are tildes.
Katie: *Drops her needle, her face a bright red* I-It's okay.. *Kneels down, fumbling with it and sticks it back in her pocket*
[i] Candy's tasting sweeter on the moon. I ran faster. "Jillian! No!" I stopped listening to any other sounds. "Please don't leave mommy,...
I betcha it was a peppermint monster.