Separate names with a comma.
Kris: *Sits in the RcR*
One tip: Use paragraphs where they should be. Apart from that, well done!
(Lol)
(So, what's going on in here?)
Axel: *In camp*
(Okay, I'll be Cloud starting tomorrow )
Axel: *Kisses her lovingly*
P-Potter? As in..? Oh, sorry, you probably get that often... *Blushes and offers hand* I'm Kris... Lovegood.
Axel: *Hugs her tightly* Love you too!
*Walks into the RcR*
Axel: *Kisses back* Wonderful! *Smiles*
(Hmmmm, I don't mind either way)
(Kris Lovegood Ravenclaw Looks: [img] Personality: Will be shown Patronus: A lynx Wand: Was given Luna Lovegood's second wand after she reclaimed...
Axel: I'm fine, no worries! How about you and the twins?
Axel: *Returns to camp*
*A kid throws a rock at me and I catch it without looking, throwing it back and hitting him between the eyes with it* Moron...
(Oh, stupid TYPOS! *Year!)
*I sit in District 8* The Reaping... What a waste of time, they might as well just execute one of us each yeae...
(Okay, cool)
Axel: *Heads towards camp on foot* Cloud...