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Celtic: You call us Pathetic. Just because you're not human. You don't get our lives so don't walk around acting high, when you're not HUMAN....
I agree with Angela. Your detailing is good. Gives the readers a more detailed imagination.
Celic: -backs up- Celtic: -grabs hold of Celic- Shhh.
Celtic: You're pathetic Darkness. You always will be. YOU'RE A COWARD. Celic: -starts crying-
Celic: -frantic looking- -runs over to Blake- Celtic: Thanks Darkness. Thanks a lot.
Celtic: WELL HELL YEAH! SHE'S GONE MUTE! She had a traumatic incident before she lost her memory!!
Yep it's hard to pronounce.
I know a cuss word in Italian..Being Britalian..
Celic: .... Celtic: WHAT DID YOU DO?! -yells at Blake and Darkness-
How to say toilet bowl in Chinese..German..Canadians...
Celic: .... Celtic: Found her! -runs over to Celic- Celic..what's wrong? Celic: ....
How to say it!
Celic: -tears start falling and some fall on her hand- -looks at the tears weirdly- .....
Celic: -looks at him and touches his face- ..... Celtic: Where the fuck is she?!
Celic: -looks at him- .....
TELL MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Celic: -opens eye lids a bit- Celtic and Night: -Frantically searching for Celic-
That's...interesting.
And this is why I find Canadians interesting...
Celic: -crying and yelling in agonized pain- Stop...-faints- Night and Celic: -running everywhere- Where's Celic?!