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Yay Finally Bump
-I shrug and settle down on the grass, leaning against my satchel as I read my book-
-I look around and see the only bench has some girl on it- Damn... Now, try an make a friend or find a good place to sit..?
-I stay silent as the principal yells at me, finally walking off- that was entertaining -I grin-
-I don't notice the man in a grey suit walk up to me until he yanked me out the tree- Woah what the he-llo sir -I bite my lip, pulling out my...
-I walk back outside and climb a tree, mumbling the lyrics quietly-
-I walk into a building, seeing no one I felt like socializing with I slide my headphones in and blast FIR-
-Brandons POV- I grinned at the huge group of girls out the front of the house, parking my car quickly and walking up the driveway. "Hey Bren,...
Haha thanks, I'm going to try and punctuate more, and it'll get more descriptive soon
This is my first story I've written to post anywhere.. Your comments would be appreciated -Emmys POV- The car ride was painfully slow, I just...
I thought they set her up with a guy named James?
She will be -I smile and conjure an apple-
What do you think Frey might be?
-I follow Aqua- You do know I can hear you when your muttering? -I smile-
I hate thinking of anything heart breaking -I write a name in Theban runes on my wrist with an ink-tipped feather-
You dont know how heartbreaking it is when you never knew your true family, knowing anyone you meet eyes with could be a brother, or sister -I snarl-
-I walk out and sit on the stairs-
-I walk into the school gates, running my hand through my hair- Great, new school, new brainless idiots to be annoyed by...