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I tug Bidam and Shu in through the window. "If you don't, I'll show you all the methods of torture I learned." I growl
"Hardly, Anna. I'd never forget my best friend." I say, smiling.
"Hi." I say, smirking. "Mind telling me why you two are sneaking around?" I ask, crossing my arms
(vampire super-hearing.) "I can hear you two, you know. What the hell are you doing?" I sigh, leaning out the window, my eyebrow arched.
I look down at the open book, reading the part about 1/3 vampires. My eyes widen a bit as I go to the open window. "Shu?"
I hiss, raising my voice. "It's Raven! Why is this door locked?" I snap the door handle and force the door open.
I pause, hearing turning pages coming from the study. I grasp the doorknob and it doesn't move. "Hello? Who's in there?" I say, knocking on the door.
"Anna, it's nothing..." I murmur
"My brother can burn in hell for all I care..." I growl, throwing my palette on the floor, splattering red paint on the carpet. I sigh at what I...
(pfft, I knew that )
My eyes narrow at the familiar noise of a can spraying. "Guards!" I shout. They come filing into my room. "Find the intruder and bring them here....
(and vampires can only get drunk off of blood )
(yep I'm a slow typer sometimes )
I turn around and see a dagger protruding from the wall. Swiftly yanking it out, I look at the message on the handle
( it was part of the storyline I had planned out. If nobody signed up for it then I'll improvise )
I wish to attend
(my mean brother is gonna be "assassinated" if Bidam tries. )
I tap the paintbrush in a crimson watercolor paint, and begin painting an intricate picture of a rose. (I was serious about the dramatic entrance....
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(you mean Hannibal? Who hilariously went girly on me )