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Kaira: I turned to Drake, "Can't we do something?"
Kaira: I gripped the coin in the palm of my hand. "What's happening out there!? What the heck is going on!?" I tried to resist hitting the wall....
Kaira: Being rushed inside and looking at Ark all alone out there. That idiot why does he never think about himself at times. It'd be better if...
Prior: Kaira: "I love snow! We should make an igloo!" (If prior's not okay then scratch that) Now: Kaira: She jogs towards them, "What the...
Kaira: "I don't... *huff* see a need *huff* for change of weather." I stopped running and slouched over with my hands on my knees. I've been...
Bam Sam Shake that
Like ashlee said, I'll add on to- Please move the arguments to PM, you can easily access a poster's profile by clicking their name if you haven't...
(Mmm, I had a thought for the nexklace but if no one takes, may I make a second character? I of course shall wait :3)
Shake that Aside from some typos here and there, is the non use of male and female words, i.e. bambino, you can just say bambina it'd still...
Heehee I look forward to the updates!! For now I shall satisfy my crave to read on your other projects! Hi ho cheerio and awaaay~ I should be...
My comments/tips. Punctuation inside the quotation marks. I forgot if someone addressed this already but here's an example. "My name is Tamaki....
~Continue~ "Yeah, two large pies, one extra cheese and the other," I put my hand to the phone and looked at the kid. "Half extra and half...
Okay let's hope it won't cut my post short.
I did! I'm telling you it wouldn't allow me to post it fully! Lol. Thank you! :3
*long white and brown spear. (If the spear isn't allowed then i'll be a fist fighter.)
Strengths: •Clever •Agile (or flexible, I'm having second thoughts) •Highly determined. Weaknesses: •She doesn't see her asthma as a weakness,...
I am but its not letting me post fully
Weapons: Fist (including anything worn on the hands) and a long white
Name: Kaira Omaran Age: 18 Appearence: 5' 5"; long black hair down to her back, with a blue and pink streak in it; Light Skin with a farmer's tan...
(I know I know :3 so I'm guessing we create the artifact power when we choose it right? Almost done writing skeleton)