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Peyton: only about 200 years... I haven't looked at it in a while though, that's why it's dusty.. - smiles -
Valise; is there any water there? - smiles -
Valise; - sighs and picks at her nails -
A bit pointless. Dont'cha think?
Valise; - shakes head and sits on the top of my suitcase -
It puts me off because its just way too much
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Lilith; - sighs - where is here!?
Lilith; - sighs and walks out of the house and into the forest- Bella!! Where the hell are you!?
Peyton; - smiles - let's do that in a minute. Let's start with this. - pulls out a big black book and blows the dust off it - a bit dusty.. - laughs -
? All I saw was all that then
Peyton; ok.. Soooo
Lilith; - glares at Scarlett - In not staying here with you. - shifts back to a human -
Lilith; she wanted time to think!! Ido have feelings and thoughts you know!
Peyton; - smiles / don't worry. Well all had to learn from somewhere but you are just learning a bit later on.
! It is so true!! Although I panicked a bit when I saw 'Pixies'.. Then I realised that its not about me!