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Kaira: "Ribs are packed."
Kaira: "Thank you." I breathed. I slowly walked to pack my bags and a cooling bag. Got my weapon with me and a back up. Put my knuckle adornments...
Kaira: "Bleeding that much isn't good for anybody." I got a bit annoyed. "Bandage yourself at least."
"Okay but you get treated now." Kaira was practically pushing him.
Kaira: "NOT TILL I TREAT YOU- wait what you say?"
Kaira: "That's it." She sighed. She walked over and picked him up a bit. "Drake, come help." I grunted a little.
Kaira gives a thumbs up and then holds her hand behind her back.
Kaira: I waved the pie behind my back. I stared down Ark. (Eh Kaira being in a bad mood. Geoff and Jack getting beaten up. So on and so forth. I...
Kaira: "I'm not joking! See you can't even stand up straight! You're still bleeding! Get back there right now!" My hands were clenched up into fists.
Kaira: "You can't do that if you drop dead now!" I yelled out.
Kaira: I kept holding the pie and talked by the door frame. "You're in no condition to train. Your wound isn't even treated."
Kaira: I stared at Ark. My eyes wanting to tell him to get back to the healing station. I patted Drake then went and took out a piece of cherry pie.
Kaira: I cleared my throat, "I swear..." I sighed and got out all the bark and splinters out of Geoff. It took a while but with the magnifier I...
Kaira: I did something I thought I'd never do to a friend. I slapped him. "Sit down." I said rather coldly. I tended to Geoff's shoulder first....
Wow so many pages and not finished? :0 I wonder if it will :3
Kaira: I help Geoff and Ark. Practically pushing Ark to stay. I began tending to their wounds and also got out the sewing kit. I was mad, but I...
Kaira: "GO tend to your wound... NOW!" I was getting agitated. I headed to the window. Yup it was still there, I wasn't hearing things. I looked...
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Kaira: I turned around holding my bottles. "Hey." I said quietlu then I looked up. "You're injured, I knew it." I said a bit disappointed and...