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Satar eyed the man, "sounds like a shit load of trouble..." Lictoral spoke up, "what's in it for us?"
danzo pulled out a bandage from a hidden pocket and began to wrap up conners hand, "this should be good enough until you can get proper help."...
The man stopped and looked at Damrel, "Im not here to fight, in fact.. I want to recruit you." Yesha looked aggravated, "first.. Your name" The...
Nice
I completely understand what she's saying funky :p no need to illiterate. XD Nice though :)
But u will be waiting for your next update.. The day after tomorrow?
It's a fantasy lol. I write fantasy :)
Yeah the bugger wouldn't stop asking :p and I found an opening in the plotline. So why not.
I'm putting danzo in my story
:) you have a nice story going.
Yep.
You have to somehow enterweave the subliminal message into the action so you don't have to go around explaining :p Just kidding that's more...
Lol well if you say so
Lol. Guess it's her Mindset.
Thanks!
No problem. I know about the stuff. I'm currently finishing a book to try and get it published XD Keep up the good work though!
That'd be useful if put at the beginning of the story describing the future setting unless it's being used as a twist/ "twilight zone" effect....
Hahaha
Lmao
Nevermind boyo :p