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No offense to the OP, but find a single person that has said "ill come back" and then didn't return. Talk about a friggin guilt trip. Personal...
Couple of errors. Shrilled --> Shriller and shriller Ad ----> And
Flash forward past the boring parts of the boat getting under way and all that. They've been out at sea for 4 or 5 hrs already ...
Decline I wanna see what he'd do and everyone else was saying accept. I has to be the oddball.
Alot better. Doing great Chica.
I agree. It's a good story so far, but you do need to tell us why she'd think that about Riley. Do a prologue and describe Riley and his...
Some people are still having trouble getting on.
I missed 3 hours of my own wedding.
Give us more???
I'm currently seeking help on how to better my story. Please standby for further updates. Feel free to wall me any advice concerning the story....
Give me your definitions of "more descriptive". Different people have different opinions on description, and I want to make this story the best it...
Thank you for your advice, Jelly. And I'm sorry Megaman, all the characters are planned out. I'm having trouble with 3 povs, I think a 4th would...
Story Challenge has been updated if anyone is interested.
I'm still surprised people actually like this story. I'm not that good in my opinion. Lol
Amy and her identical twin sister, Amelia. Lol
UPDATE. SASHA I laugh to myself thinking of the things Amy and Lia will most likely bring. Amy always packed for worst case scenarios and...
My garage door (one the leads from the garage to my dining room) opens by itself. We have one of those hook and hole latches with the spring. You...
Please do not turn this into a gossip thread. I knew one of the young victims and I do not wish to see how they were murdered cause some lunatic...
Jenette, Story challenge won't be updated for 1 week in remembrance for those lives lost today. Whenever to think of my story, take a moment to...
My family pulled their kids out of school today. Some withdrew them. This really hit home for my family.