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Mia: "I figured," she replies, rolling her eyes but smiling slightly. "What was she talking about though? And that seems kinda..." She trails...
I can't stop laughing. xD I get that you want to find her, but damn.
Mia: She watches them talk, raising an eyebrow slightly. She assumed the other girl was a supernatural, but she was too lazy to do anything, and...
Mia: She nods, guessing that meant something to do with fire. She frowned after a second, glancing at him. "Are you going to kill me or-?" She...
Mia: She smiles slightly. "Nah, I'm good. How'd you do that anyway?" Mia asks curiously, the smile disappearing as she fiddles with her knife.
Mia: "Well screw you too," she said casually, stifling a yawn and shuffling slightly. "I prefer to see myself as more as a ladybug though."...
Mia: She gets up of the floor quickly, ignoring the leaves in her hair. She folds her arms and backs away slightly, her eyes still wide. "Okay I...
Mia: "You're an asshole!" She yells at him, her eyes widening in a alarm as her skin begins to burn. Mumbling a swear word under her breath, she...
Mia: She smirks. "If you say so." She glances briefly at the knife, debating if it would be worth it to try and attack.
Mia: She lowered her knife slightly, but still kept it close to her, before narrowing her eyes. "So you're like some creepy old dude? How old...
Mia: "Dude. Really. I'm preeeetty sure I'd notice if my clothes were on fire." Mia turned around to face him, shooting a glare at him. "Look,...
Mia: She winces slightly before changing her expression back into a stubborn smile. "I uh, I knew it was an illusion anyway." She grips her...
Mia: She walks for a while, her shoes lightly clicking on the floor. Out of the corner of her green eyes she notices Edge, remembering he was...
Jess: "Coffee!" She declares, before sheepishly scratching her head at how loud it turned out. She stands up, brushing the grass of her jeans...
Wall me when updated please. :3
Congratulations?
Haha, maybe. I was wondering if there was any more different/unusual, but I don't think there is. Oh well. :3 Also, what would be some...
(Ooh you people are awake in my time for once. I have no idea what's going on so idk, I'm guessing it's day time. xD) Jess: She sits in the grass...
Come on, seriously. 'They Had war'. Geez. I'm not even going to say that this is a decent idea and could be improved. It's well, kinda crappy....
I like it. Instead of *phone ringing*, maybe describe it actually happening but yeah. Also maybe be slightly more descriptive and set the scene a...