Separate names with a comma.
WTF is your problem? Lmao
Arical the list is bug lol it might be a while. And yyaaaaaaay
Re: Don't give out your UDID! It's because they know i won
Bumpity bump bump
So when I read it I only kinda understand what your trying to tell me and it leaves me to be not so eager for your next post. Overall it's bad...
You still missing multiple punctuations and misuse of words and missing letters.
Idk
Referal*
Nice job. And thanks for the federal!
You know as much as Lictoral ;)
that's improper grammar right there. I'm not correcting, I'm pointing it out so you can fix it, so the story may be more enjoyable and smooth...
Shelby say back down. She was self conscious now. Lictoral walked out of the room and approaches Satar, "what exactly did, fletch, Thad his name...
You don't know what you said yet
Satar caught his Breath, "hey elfie, you sure know how to talk to women!" Damrel snickered. The elf sighed, "I didn't mean it like that."...
I agree with danzo!
Lictoral saw it, Satar sat laughing as a tall elf, with typical pointed ears and a green tunic, had cider all over his face and a slender women...
Busy day for me
You haven't been reading much have you? Look back in the pages. It should explain. And don't worry. Your character is almost here.
Luke dropped his goblet on the table then leaned back, "I'm set, dinner here ain't bad at all." Luke gestured Tal and they entered the room....
Rose laughed, "yeah right." Satar took four, and plopped them in his mouth at once. He smiled. Suddenly his face turned a light red. He bit his...