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Jodie say on her bed, the room was too silent she decided, "so you guys are mercenaries too?" Lictoral nodded, "have been my entire life really"...
Satar*
Back outside star talked to rose, "so you got some kills in then?" Rose nodded as she sipped some more drink. Satar smiled, "nice, what is your...
The two stared at each other for a while before the door opened agian, a blonde girl dressed in light armor and holding a long single sided blade...
Lictoral looked up, soon a skeptical look was drawn about his face, "what's up, Yesha, not hungry?" Yesha shook he head as she walked to the side...
As the people at the table ate, Lictoral sat on his bed cleaning the blade of his sword. Suddenly the door creaked open.
So far so good :)
Yep! Just watching out
Great job but heads up. Don't bypass the filter. If your going to swear or say bastard. Just say it and let it censor it out so you don't get into...
Oh okay :D thanks
L33t? Lol
At the dining table a large crowd of soldiers and recruits from the battle crowded. Satar looked at the table, it was filled with a layout of...
There you go! Two random halffast characters that I put no thought into
Name:Gregory Age: 23 Smart and tough.
Name Ben Dover Age: 14 His name says it all
Grammar!!! Lol
Um.. Geez where to Start on that one. :?