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(Aww Percyous you know I love you more hehe...)
( Nahh Im just kidding)
( Ok sure )
(Lol Love you too )
(Nevermind )
( Tarru dont leave, if you leave I'll be sad)
Angel -Hugs Miya- Its ok
Angel -Crosses fingers that they dont get hurt-
(What did I miss?)
I like it! Very good writing!
Angel -Thinks then gasps- It must be my fault! I made an alliance with King Percyous, he's going to war because of me
Angel: I dont know, thats what were trying to figure out
Angel -Puts her daughter on the horse with her- Sweetheart two King's from the dark kingdom are going to war
Angel -Rides out on a horse with her guards and stops at a distance that should could watch but not get hurt-
Angel -Wonders if Colin brought that man that claimed he was her father onto the boat and starts looking through the cabin's-
Guard -Runs to Angel- Queen their are soldiers, quickly come! Come! Angel -Runs after the guard, telling other guards to go get her daughter-,
Angel -Starts looking around the boat-
Angel -Crosses over and goes inside-
Angel -Frowns- No, you stay here, where its safe
Angel -Nods- Ok, be careful