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Jacy: I looked the other way. "That was a bad part of the dream."
Jacy: "yes?"
Kaira: "Woah!!" I fell backwards but a body still pounced me. I held onto it and opened my eyes. "Nina?!"
(Gotta catch up again)
I'm in the process of transferring over updates. Don't worry, I won't leave you all in the dark.
Jacy: "Teehee." I gave a cheeky smile. "I may not help you steal but I do have to keep my eye on these guys." I said a bit quietly. Kaira: I...
Jacy: "Yup!" I giggled falsely. "The armor is right there." I pointed to it, "My armor seemed to fit you just fined though." I giggled.
Jacy: Hm, what to say... "A, Romance Novel."
Jacy: "That's why." I held it closely.
Jacy: I snatched it back.
Jacy: I held it closed and close to my chest, "Nooo."
Jacy: I snatched the book, "Nuh uh."
(I know lol xD just thought it'd be funny.) Jacy: "Everything is still here, spare armor, some weapons, fire proof suit, a copy of files, a...
(Well, Hun is a shorty :3) Jacy: "Yes!" Found it.
(Idk whether to make hun the object or not xD)
Jacy: I pointed at the short object in the distance, "There."
Jacy: "Maybe!" I ran up towards the short object.
(Maybe :3) Kaira: I pinched myself and felt it. I sighed in relief. I looked up at the sky and started to calm down my breathing. Jacy: I...
Jacy: I walked further, "I think this is where we were before the attack." Kaira: "It's not real. It's not real, Its, Not, Real!"
You're very welcome CinCin! :3 I hope to read more!! The twists were shocking :0