Separate names with a comma.
Gah... the grammar mistakes I'll say one thing: Learn to spell if you want to be taken seriously. I'm assuming your first language is English....
(I'm here )
(page 41 on this thread... you meant the story update right? )
For legal reasons, I'm changing all the characters except the ones I made myself
I'm lumping serious about this; you should publish this story! I'd buy it
(update's on page 41) (the announcement is titled: "Announcement! " in Fan Fiction)
Bump! Very talented
Bump!!!!
(my profile anyways ) Name: Raven Age: 18 Looks: Tall, Black hair that reaches her waist with blue streaks at the bottom, piercing grey eyes,...
(May I join? )
"Uh, with what? We were discussing the weather." I say hurriedly
I sigh, rolling my eyes. "Did you forget the underground passageway in the castle? You and jacob can meet up there."
I pinch Lily, laughing. "Of course she is! You've made her blush A LOT."
"Erm, Lily, I see you've been quite accustomed to Jacob here." I snicker
(We're outside books )
(Lily does this Jacob look like a certain werewolf we all know and love? )
(Jacob Motorboat ) "Hello."
(I'd make a boob joke but I don't feel like it now )
I sigh, hugging her back. "Yeah, yeah. Let's go already." I snort, walking outside
(dammit! )