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And skizophrenic (Alternate personality: Keller. He is pessimistic and judgmental. Very self-centered and cowardly.)
Hannibal Guy Human Short Red hair, green eyes, freckles. Kind of wimpy. Sucked into all of this solely by coincidence. Wears glasses that fall...
Um...I'm sorry, but this Holly character is a bit of a slut...
Bump
Um...well, to be a critique, this seems a bit fast. Not much back story or emotion...I mean, is this a prologue or have you started the story?...
Oh. Mah. Monkey.
Um...it's a he
I JUST REALIZED HE SAID DIES
.-. Very...descriptive
Dude Srsly? Let's see...
Don't laugh so hard you pee. That's not ever fun >.<
In the head: yes
It's...confuzzling
You just got killed
Wait...start over again
Bump <33
That's what I was thinking... Also, the stark simplicity lacks something to be desired. (spoken like a true ) but, anyways, they're moving a bit...
Mine is to find the perfect name
1)IM A GENIE 2)Uh, fellow Bazingan? 3) HARDER MIKE (I meant that to sound dirty 4) It shouldn't be .-.
Bump