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She dropped on her knees as tears streamed down her pink cheeks. "Who are you to hurt her, man! You go all warm to her, treat her more than a...
This is quite good just need to work on your rhyming more haha
I stood before the wooden door, slowly peeking through the glass to see the new people and took a breath, one step at a time, breath in and out I...
can I join? It sounds cool but idk what to write
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haha glad you liked it Princess229
I agree with you
Lol guys if you like lovey-dovey stories read on haha Yo everyone, I had a dream last night about some lovey-dovey people n idk, I thought...
great story, just use paragraphs
Yay paragraphs hahaha lol great story
Lol okay hahahaha
great Just make paragraphs spaced out
This is good, just fix some stuff like your paragraphs, make em shorter but great start so far
Everyone stared at him through shocked eyes. Sally simply approached him, looking bored. Once she stood above the dying teacher, she turned...
so good
It's good just fix some stuff up hehe
btw I noticed you wrote "sama" isn't that Japanese?
Ohh this is good well my only problem was that the paragraphs were toooooooo long but all together it was great haha
Its good, but it seems to short without paragraphs but still good hehe
"Shut up." The voice was uninterested... cold... emotionless. The face was impassive- smooth, void of any and all emotions. "Excuse me?" The...