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Darius: he looks around
Darius: Teleports to the home
( and so did Dasper)
Dasper: he replies to Val, defending Shi. "we do what we do because it's amusing" he laughs again
Darius: goes full Ancestor and puts his hand on Ark's
Darius: -Dasper comes into play, still using Darius' body- "calm yourself shi. You'll give yourself an aneurism." he laughs.
Darius: stretches the piece into a thin bubble over him.
Darius: becomes bored and molds a piece of metal he keeps on him.
Darius: sits next to the pond
Darius: "hmm. Curious."
Darius: he watches from a bush. not hiding, just observing.
Darius: happens upon Ark, Raven and the rest. He just kinda stands there, shock paralyzing him.
Darius: stumbles upon snow and the others "the hell."
Darius: hears unusually loud yelling and heads to investigate.
(okay now I'm lost )
(^da hell?) Darius: "hmm" he looks over at Sydney.
Darius: he walks along and sees his friend Sydney.
(okay, I'm not gonna read through the 30 or so pages so far to catch up, but I did catch who mr. smith was)
( whats happened so far?)
(okay, hope it's nothing too serious o.o)