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Just gonna bump this until I have the next chapter
I will
*Mark started... Tense change
Chapter 1: Blood splattered across Mark's face. It was still warm... steaming in fact. Mark wiped the viscous, crimson liquid from his face.Still...
Oh, please be gentle when it comes to the criticism please.
(since it's only really me and Nikki, i accept
Knight: "okay" he follows.
Knight: he smiles and heads out the door. He then waits for Jordan to point the way to her house.
Knight: he reaches the room where he keeps his stuff and starts to sift through it. He grabs some food, a bit of water, and ammo for his weapon....
3, because it's the month of my birth, the last title in the Doom series is Doom 3, the cyberdemon (boss) in Doom 1 fired bursts of 3 rockets, and...
Please, tell me how ive done thus far and if I should continue. Remember it is one of my first stories.
Death. Death is inevitable. No matter what you do, where you run, or what you believe in, death takes you anyway.... Prologue: "Help! Help me"...
Knight: he stops at a house and slowly opens the door. He grabs the pistol and slowly enters.
Knight: he nods his head and starts to take a couple steps "yes"
Knight: he looks up at her. "no answer?"
Knight: he kind of glances down, not wanting to tell her how slim the chances were that she's still alive. " yeah. You can try"
Knight: he finishes his meal. "if you put it that way, yeah. But I was really concerned with it eating me after it was done with you" his face...
Knight: he smiles " thank you" he then sits down and eats.
Knight: he shrugs. "I got a stache of supplies not too far from here" his stomach starts to grumble. "I'm hungry"