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Darius: his smile widens a bit and he leans back.
(aww nah )
Darius: catches on and follows.
(why? )
Darius: laughs a little "did I scare you?" a slight smile appears on his face.
Darius: his voice lowers slightly "those of pirates"
Darius: "I'm sorry..." he looks down at the ground.
Darius: "I was told you have connections."
Darius: forms a short dagger that almost stabs into Snow. Quickly forms all the metal back. "sorry"
Darius: "no, I'm looking for a proposition." he looks up at scarlet"
Darius: sits calmly, molding metal.
^ that was actually a legit typo
Darius: finishes his drink and waits for scarlet.
Other than the occasional error, a truly gore filled murder tale with a not so happy ending..... FUCING LOVED IT!!!!!
(damn) Chapter 3: Mark woke in a cold sweat. The nightmare he had experienced set his heart racing. A voice came to comfort him. "What's wrong...
(damn)
Chapter 3: Mark woke in a cold s
(yeah...)
Darius: relaxes a bit "I'd imagine so"
(damn, continuing on with that) Darius: nods "seems almost like a robot"