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Mark: sits down again, deciding he doesnt want to go back.
Mark: completely oblivious to the events unfolding, he walks back to his home.
Mark: he stands up and walks some more. He continues thinking about how he wants his voice back.
Mark: frowns and thinks to himself. I wanna get out, now....
Mark: lays back and relaxes more...
Mark: sits down outside and relaxes a bit
Mark: he walks along the streets, feeling the slight breeze around him. This place was peaceful, compared to the area around it.
( just realized... Mark's and Jack's powers are very similar, but somewhat different)
Mark: stares blankly at his mirror. He looks across the scar on his neck and decides to go out. Maybe it'll clear his head of things. He pulls up...
Yay!!!!
Ugh.. Sean, how many more until ^we start?
Darius: I set up at the range and ready the rifle.
Yuuki!!!! You're back!!!!
Darius: I sigh, pick up my Kar98 and head out to the range outside. "maybe this will be fun"
Darius: sits and taps my fingers against the table.
Feelings the same Sean
Mark Serventus (yes im changing the name up) 16 (I'm not gonna bother finding a picture) average height, with a bit more muscular build about him....
Darius: I sit and enjoy the rest of my coffee.
*update again
Could you review my story "Regrets"? I think it's on page 5 now, I want to know if I should update