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(thatd be my only point really)
(its more of a subdue and retrieve... More than a kill...)
Mark:-calmly looks out about the forest-
Mark: -sighs and makes sure im still within earshot of everyone, and edges away more, trying to issolate myself-
Mark: -sighs in relief and sits down out of sight. Iooks up at the sky-
Mark: -looks over at the group and slips away for a bit-
Mark: i am the commisar, i thought it was apparent.. But yes, practicaly
Mark: i dont like being tickled..
Mark: that was you?
Mark: -cringes a bit- i dont.... like it.. No
Mark: -looks at Shay- you noticed him too...
Mark: some of them do im sure
Mark: i know that... But the crew still isnt ready to trust...
Mark: i can get in a better way though... If i give myself to one of their patrols for capture, itll be easy. The shots to stop our mutations dont...
Mark: its hard to think of that when all of our expiriences with non humans have been less than friendly
Mark: -once we're out of earshot i stop and turn- i cant help how they feel about you..
Mark:-glances down at the leg and winces a bit- The guard looks up at me: im... Im gonna be fine.. Right? -i nod and pat him on the shoulder,...
Mark: -glances up at Morgan- we'll talk about it later...
Mark: well what all do we have to get past?
Mark: -pats the guard and gets up getting the board for morgan. I bring it over-