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Rose: Well I suppose I can... Yes I'll accept my full powers... -amiles softly-
Saylor: -sighs and Sits a few feet away from the couple-
Rose: I... I.. Do not mean to disrespect him in any way of he's my father.
Rose: Whys that? What have I done?
Rose: I'm the Grim Reaper.... So my fathers Hades?
(Oh now I see what ya mean! Uhm Read the Rp. Kane took me to his temporary house)
Rose: -sighs- Tell me everything
Saylor: -keeps walking past them- Sigh
(Yeah?)
Rose: D-danger? I'm just a normal person... Who'd want me In danger?
Saylor: -stands and walks past the two holding each other, the loyal wolf at her side-
Rose: I am Rose..
(Who's rosa? I'm Rose?)
Rose: -blushes softly sitting up- Who are you...?
(Yes just make sure to look at the other characters and don't steal ideas )
Rose: -grabs his hand- Stay...?
Saylor: -hears them sing and almost passes out from Carlos's voice and Rebecca's-
(Same here. Makes me cry Everytime I hear it)
(My Immortal -- Evanescence)
Saylor: -sighs again and sings loud enough for all of them to hear-