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Good story, keep it up! Don't worry what people say, just, give it your all. Just a tip: try and format it a little better, that way it's all...
Bump! That is what I think.
UPDATE!!! I HAS A WANTING FOR MOAR!!!
Bump!!! Who's the mystery person?!
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Bump!! Glad to see my characters getting his swag on!
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BUT...BUT...BUT... you just are!! And you won like the golden pen award thingy-ma-bob! So hah!
Yeah me and my enchanting laugh. BUMP!! I WANT MORE!!!
Bump!! CLEARLY THE BEST AUTHOR EVER!! FACT!
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Sorry for not updating guys, I've been really busy with school lately. I'm also not in a really creative mood today. Woke up way too...
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Can you critique me story Immortal Angel?