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Hey you still alive? Update already! This is really good, don't give up now.
This is cool. Can't wait for more.
sweet JESUS woman your gonna give me nightmares!! ... But I like the story! quite suspenseful. Now I must change my underwear....
Can't wait for the next update. Looking forward to some more detail.
>:) Dooooooo iiiittttt o.o
Join up people!! Get the creative juices flowing and post away! The more the merrier.
Good stuff, keep it coming.
Hmm interesting . But, seriously, this is good. At a cursory glance, I can't find anything wrong with this. So, I guess all I can say is keep it...
Fail at BB Code oh well.
Perhaps your stories only cater to a select few and that's why you don't get bombarded with reviews. Or, maybe you need to change your [i] style...
I can safely say that I have fallen victim to posting the dreaded and somewhat vague so called "review" that is "hmmm interesting". But, having...
Bump, this is awesome. Give me MOAR!
Like this little guy over here your story needs to grow, and has the potential to do so. Add more detail for starters. That'll make it more...
Good stuff. This is funny keep it up.
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Interesting... please do continue...
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By the time it takes you to update I'll be old and grey like this kind sir over here . Hurry up! I don't want wrinkles. Just messin' with...
Bumpity bump
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