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Just chill bichéz. Let him write the story in final draft tho ya u should probly change names
(yupp)
(cyas. Wait wat the hell r you doin in sam's room rhyan?!?!)
G: *eventually stops twitching, and stirs slowly*
I think he should go with the killing the other guy idea...
(hes not in a natural sleep. Just let him go thru the dream, then hell wake up)
G: *nothing happens*
(cool) G: *still unconsious*
(cya) *wont wake up*
*twitches slightly*
*has dark nightmare*
Juss an idea
Oh oh oh oh it should b bout the guy she left you for and how you killed him and are trying to cover up the murder i love books like that
G: *leans forward and kisses you* i love you... *drifts back into sleep*
G: *stirs at the thought, thinking back* not till the day i die
G: *dreams about sam, smiling in my sleep*
G: *still asleep*
(i confused...)