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Yeah you're too strict with your characters... Take it somewhere else
Bump!!
Bump!
Zach: What's wrong?
Zach: -falls on you- Oh God -stands up and helps you up-
Zach: -turns to Sophie- I guess I'll see ya later -runs to Renae-
Zach: -winces a little- Your lucky I don't want to hurt you
Zach: It's nice to see you outside of school
Zach: -smiles- It's gonna take a little more than that to get me down
Zach: -walks up the steps, sees Sophie- It's Sophie, right?
Zach: -pulls up in her driveway, gets out of his car-
Zach: -gets in his car and drives to Renae's house-
Zach: -pushes a little on his sword to equal her weight- I think the proper word is Touché
Zach: -smiles and rushes her-
Zach: -gets out and puts on his costume- [img] (Sorry if it's big and/or blurry!)
Zach: -wheels around quickly-
Zach: -inches closer to her-
Bump!!!