Separate names with a comma.
it's pretty obvious
tiger you can't even write
hOW IS SHE NOT POLITE HOW IS SHE YELLING JUST LOOK AT HER COME ON INSTEAD OF SPEWING USELESS CRITICAL SHIT JUST THINK FOR A MOMENT HOW USELESS...
god damnit still haven't changed it
GAY HOOKAH bby sui? suyyyyy
sup
okay this author is one of the best things that has come to ff just look at her god she's so polite and mature with feedback ahhhh
please don't go on diets to get slimmer exercise is a much better option but don't trust online diets the only one you can trust is the "eat...
Then don't try to copy my mistakes. :|
Whelp just some feedback i really want to read the next chapter oUo
*you're not "your not ready to start writing" And you wrote when you were 8 years old? At this skill level? I understand if you're trying to...
You're not Gordon Ramsay, qurl. She is taking feedback, but the way you're giving it isn't exactly polite.
You're welcome! A space after the commas as well, by the way. I'm really glad a part of the community is openly accepting criticism and critique...
losing its swag losing its swag LOSING ITS SWAG i swear to god if that wasn't an ironic usage of the word "swag" i will whale slap the shit...
And That's bypassing Like if "apple" were filtered and wouldn't let you type the whole thing without being replaced with * and you go "a*ple!"...
Word of advice: there's always a space after a punctuation mark. eg. I put on a floral patterned tank top, denim shorts, and plain navy blue...
**royale and qin
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where the fuck is my pot chicken pie fuck your j p d f g i want my pot chicken pie
y'all taste like pot chicken pie and i could go for some pot chicken pie damn.