Separate names with a comma.
A few mistakes here and there, I can't really see the plot yet but I'm hoping it's a good story. Maybe you should edit it before posting. Also a...
Someone once said it was his birthday and asked me to hire him as a present
This is really nice! You should continue writing. But remember, you're is different from your.
Happy Birthday!
And something rather important that I spotted out No is not Know.
You need to get this edited, there is a ton of spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes and it feels like you're speaking to the readers in monotone...
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BubbleGum Send me red meegos or blue purple is fine too
A Pimd version of an epic battle. I remember you.
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Ohh thanks!!
Nice witch Reese it looks scary
How do you find out the total amt of mojo you have? follow me there BubbleGum
sorry. I thought it didn't post the first time
Then what will happen to the meegos if you have no food at all?
Then what if you don't have any food? What will happen to the meegos?
Anyone knows what the food is for? And how do I feed them?