Separate names with a comma.
(Add in head after "I said raised her")
John: -walks over to her and raises her hair so she's looking into my eyes- you got the most beautiful eyes I've seen Madame
John: that's all I have
John: Bonjour Madame
John: -walks back to a drink and swings around the bend then stops seeing Miya there- ummmm hi......
John: come now to see my world where there's Beauty beyond your world can you feel what I feel right now with you? -starts walking back to room-
John: -has earbuds in signing- I wanna know can you show me? I wanna know about the strangers like me -stops singing and nods to the music then...
John: -done unpacking so I go downstairs to get something to eat-
(How big is the bed? If it's big enough for you both share)
I was going to say "whenever I tried breath blood would flow out of my wounds"
Thx I tried hard on this I actually got this from fluke where a man dies and reborn as a dog
John: -carries my bags to an unoccupied room and unpacks-
Can people plz read my story "Reborn" and plz comment on it give your opinion to me
(Still wired and I'm not where everyone's supposed to be awkward...)
Plz read my story "Reborn" thank you if you did I just wanna hear people's opinions on it plz and thx
Get more people to read it plz?
(That's just wrong!)
I know but seriously I took like an hour to write this it was tough!
Can someone read my story "Reborn" for me? Plz and thank you sorry of it's a little long