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...Homestuck everywhere.
*doubtful my darlin'. Excellent as always.
That's the gist of it. God. I love this story.
I have to say, I don't like One Direction, and that this thread is useless, but! I had something positive to say. I forgot. In before the lock, I...
Holy inappropriate pies SHE LIVES! :D
Bitch.
...I like this. I really do. It disappoints me that it's a love story, but whatever. It's well-written.
0.0 the Fifty Shades of Grey flashbacks... STAHP CHRISTIAN YOU'RE CREEPY AF. ...so intense, man, it's like the double rainbow all the way across...
*familiar And I'm wondering if she's like a cougar, or there's another impossibly young high school teacher in there. Because it's like,...
AHAHAHA. The teacher is like a freaking teenaged boy! That's hilarious.
Omg I love him :3. He's one of my favorites.
Ah darn it, I forgot the ampersand doesn't work on PIMD!
*an intermission. Roy is an ass.
Oh wow. That's rather interesting, I suppose. One thing, you don't need to put a comma after the quotation marks, it would be preferable for you...
I think you actually have improved. I'm glad that Daniel made a logical decision in regards to their relationship. One thing, however, gotta keep...
Aha. I got a little screwy there because I was writing in present tense and the story is in past tense so I quickly revised it xD I also had some...
...I absolutely adore the landlady. That whole thing was pretty funny. It reminds me of like a intermission between acts, with a hint of romance.
*sigh* *you're It's a hard job, but someone has to do it. Also, I am loved by the numerous and plentiful friends with whom I talk to frequently...
Re: Who's The Most Hated On PIMD Yay! Gracias :{3. Warm an' fuzzy feelings...ah, hate. Btw, *who's, in the title of this thread. GRR.
...can I be hated? Please? Or at least like be...mildly disliked? I always get overlooked in these things. Oh, and Roy, you're by far the most...