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Drake: *yawns
Drake: *hands back the real one* not with petrified wood anyway judging by the time I've kept you talking you can't hit my ship anymore it's out...
(SORRY! YOU WERE ON THE HIT LIST!)
Drake: *laughs* that's what you think
(it wasn't iron it was petrified wood)
(take away the "a")
Drake: not with a reinforced armor
(I know he was over exaggerating)
Drake: *compares the copy and hands it back and blows his whistle shrilly 3 times and the ship turns back
Drake: hit my ship and 1000 more will shoot back at you
*my ship is approaching rapidly
Drake: *takes the copy* let me compare it to the real one
Drake: when my ship was here you promised me a copy of the map *blows a high pitches whistle extremely loud and The Black Phoenix starts sailing...
(*the)
Drake: my copy of he map Cynthia
Jack: *jumps on the boat with Drake
Jack: I'm going?! *sounds terrified* but it seems dangerous!
Drake: *gets onto the boat* this is my boat
Drake: good *smiles