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Rory: Please...
Rory: *wraps my arms around his neck and kisses back with all the passion love I can* Shana: I should probably go... *still blushing and starts to...
Rory: Tell me, it's just us here.
Shana: *blushes brightly and backs up* Uh...
Rory: Why are you blushing? *smiles warmly*
Rory: *kisses back with all the love and passion I can* (awkward)
Rory: *smiles and sets my violin down* We are really good together.
Rory: *smiles and keeps playing*
Rory: *kisses him back even more passionately* Shana: *looks around* It's nice...
Rory: *keeps playing softly and closes my eyes in concentration*
Shana: *smiles* Great. *walks inside*
Rory: *smiles and kisses him lovingly* Your welcome.
Shana: *smiles and bites my lip*
I have made a super long third part for the first chapter, and it will take a while to type, so I might be updating in two-three days.
Shana: *turns around blushing* Uh... Sure...
Shana: *smiles and gives Bella to Brett* Well, uh, I guess I'll... *turns to walk away*
Shana: Bella came over to Poseidon's cabin. I thought you might like her back. *smiles and I pet her*
Shana: *picks up Bella as Brett opens the door* Oh, hey.
Shana: *runs after Bella*
Rory: Okay... *jumps down and runs to my cell then grabs my violin and runs back to Ben and climbs the tree* Well, here goes nothing. *starts...