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Sadie: A-Alex... *goes even paler*
Shana: *smiles and kisses him back* I-I thought you were... Sadie: *starts to close eyes* (does no one care that Sadie is dying?)
Shana: *smiles through the tears* B-B-Brett! *hugs him*
Sadie: *starts going cold* Shana: *sits by Brett's body crying* Rory: *looks over and sees Sadie* Sadie! *runs over to her*
Sadie: *goes extremely pale and pulls back then lies down and dies slowly*
Sadie: *starts going very pale* Shana: *holds Brett's dead hand*
Rory: *starts killing monsters with hounds helping me*
Shana: *runs toward Brett's body* BRETT! Sadie: *trembles as I lose power while bringing Brett back to life*
Sadie: Come on... *starts healing him slowly using the power that I have left*
Sadie: *moans and wakes up* Dammit, Jupiter. *stands up slowly and sees Brett then walks as fast as I can to him and gives him the drink Alex gave me*
Rory: *runs and tackles the cyclops* Shana: BRETT! *yells and tackles "Drake"*
Message to my wonderful readers: I have finally finished the first chapter of the Hunger Games Fan Fic. Now bear with me, I'll make a new update...
Rory: *arrives and gasps* What the?! Shana: *throws my trident at "Drake"* Sadie: *moans still unconscious*
Rory: *hears the fighting and runs toward it* Shana: *walks to the fight and takes my trident and runs toward "Drake"* Sadie: *falls backward and...
Sadie: You woo! Jupiter, can you see me? *still invisible* Cerberus: *jumps in front of the cyclops and growls*
Sadie: *sneaks behind "Drake" and whispers something then hand releases Sam* Jupiter, look behind you.
Sadie: *smirks* Alright, Jupiter. But first... *closes eyes and whispers something then disappears*
Sadie: *drinks it* Thanks, brother. Now, what are we going I do?
Sadie: Yeah... *pulls my hand back and sees it covered in blood* Great...
Sadie: *touches head and feels blood on my fingers* Oh, now you've done it...