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Psh! Don't "Oh, Lily" me! Geez you give feedback because you get moaned at and then you get mo- psh I cannot win
Albus: Puts her on her feet and pulls her over to Scorpius. "Go get him, then." ---- James: "Psh! You have pretty eyes..." Smiles, stroking her...
Shhhhhhh!!! I woke back up like five minutes ago! I'm not fully awake yet
Okay. Check MommaPies story Deadly Sins I just gave feedback. Happier?
.-. I told Chloe I would give "real" feedback rather than "bump" so... I love this story because of the funny relationship between Mr Hall and...
Albus: Thinks. "Oh fine! C'mon we'll go find the bastard!" ---- James: "Nebraaaskaa!"
Only if chu turn the frown upside down THEN i'll give proper feedback. Would you prefer if I put: "I love this story because blahblahblah. But...
Scorpius: Stumbles past Dream.
Bump Naw I'm kidding. I put it cause usually I'm too lazy to give feedback
Albus: Chuckles. "Believe me, I want to kill him but nothing will come from it." ---- James: Runs into Nebraska. "Oh sorry! Hi!"
Chapter 2 Him It wasn't until late that same night I fell asleep, I was dreaming of being a teenager again. He was there, my highschool...
Albus: Sweeps Daisy-May off her feet and carries her away from Scorpius. "I know just don't..." says through gritted teeth.
Scorpius: Winces and kicks Daisy-Dog off of his leg. "Stupid dog." Albus: Punches Scorpius. "That was for Daisy-May." Knees him in the stomach...
Bump...
Dominique: "Sam!" sighs. Scorpius: Walks past Daisy Dog.
Dominiques POV. I had been walking around for a while trying to keep my mind off of Scorpius when I walked into someone, Shane, I'd heard around...
Dominique: Appears next to Sam fully clothed. "Hey, you heard about Lily being raped by Malfoy?"
Lily: Sees the note and wipes my eyes from crying, appearing in the Hospital Wing my voice sounding pained and guilty. "What?"
Lily: "S-S-Scorpius M-Ma-Malfoy..." Shakes in fear. (Yes the gay did it! ) ----- Dominique: Smirks and teases him. (I think that calls for...
Dominique: Smirks at him.