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Drake: *shakes his head no Man: *throws Drake on the ground and kicks him ~there is a loud crack~ Drake: *screams in pain
Drake: *opens the wooden doors on the other end to reveal 2 large men Man: *grabs Drake Other man: *jumps in and grabs Kat
(cut off) Drake: *sighs* fine *creeps silently into the hole and builds up the wall behind him and puts a finger to his lips and starts to creep...
Drake: *s
Drake: please Kat
(*us)
Drake: *loosens his grip on her arm and says quietly* if he catches us he'll torture you
Drake: *refuses to answer but maintains his grip on her arm
(let's just say she kicked the wall and it crumbled to reveal a hole) Drake: *grabs her by the arm* we are not leaving
(he doesn't have a gun) Drake: *is completely emotionless and sits back up*
Drake: *still silent
Drake: *stays silent staring at the wall
Drake; I hate it here
(whatever)
(no it isn't shooting my character in the head isn't funny)
(*scratch)
(fine don't catch you post) *the swat/police went to the wrong location and shot the wrong person because their information was screwed up*
(seriously you can't just kill one of my characters!!!!!!!!)
(you think this is the first time he kidnapped someone?!)
(no -.- they can't just do that Drake's dad has a huge security system and has bribed the police forces to turn a blind eye)